After my crit I looked at possible ways I could improve my design outcome. From the feedback I received I learned that some aspects of my design were not up to standard.
One piece of feedback I received was about the clicker I had used to represent the number of domestic violence incidents last year. I decided to change this idea and use the fist, which I had used in a previous Message and Delivery brief, and the well known no entry sign.
I also chose to change the style of phone in the bottom right hand corner, the phone I had used was slightly old fashioned which I don't think worked very well for the target audience and also the rest of my design.
I also updated my envelope as I received feedback that it looked rushed and could have been more creative. I also wanted to make it clear what was inside my mail shot from the first viewing. I am very happy with my updates and think it is a vast improvement on my previous designs.
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