I presented the final boards for some of the briefs which I have completed for individual practice and both Adam and myself presented the Redrow response.
Redrow
Fem Fresh
Bliss
Secret 7
Mali Campbell
AE | DesignBox
To start the session we were asked to layout the work for collaborative practice, once we had done this we went around the room and left comments on the work which had been presented. The excersie was really enjoyable because it allowed us to see the final resolutions to the briefs which we had not seen before. There were some really advanced responses which I think personally could win.
After a 20 minute session of laving feedback we returned to the table to read the notes left. The feedback that Adam and I received was really positive which made the hard work worth it. We did fet some notes about certain aspects that could use work but we welcomed the criticism and plan to act on it in the coming week. One of the main parts of our project I would think needs work are the final boards which I think need to have more of an impact.
After we had reviewed the feedback split into small tables and were asked to crit the individual practice work. Unfortunelty I was put on a table with a group of boys which, seen as I have completed the FemFresh brief, was not ideal. I did get some great feed back on the design of my response but not quite the feedback I would have wanted. Though this was a negative I did think the crit was very successful overall and I got the feedback that I needed to continue with the module.
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