During our design principles session today we were asked to get up our work so far into the 10 things brief. Most of the group did not have a sufficient amount of work for people to give feedback on, including myself, I had designed a small leaflet for communication is a virus which I put up on my screen for people to feedback on.
The feedback I received for this DPS was both positive and constructive.
Clean aesthetic
Really innovative use of a bottom margin
Possibly consider utilising the colours on the second page as theres an unbalance
Good DPS
Maybe rise the bottom margin of the image to create more negative space.
Although only 2 people gave me feedback I feel that I have some starting points to improve my work.
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